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Jeff The Killer: Sweet dreams are made of screams by Anyerina

Jeff's P.O.V

I couldn't believe what I'm seeing, Liu. He looked exactly what the Liu I know and lived with before I became insane.

 But, I thought 'I killed him years ago...Right?'

"L-Liu?" I said.

He nodded and stand next to (y/n) while looked at him.

"Jeff, you know him?" she said.

I nodded. "He's...He's my brother.."

"B-Brother?" she said.

I nodded. "Its been a long time Liu.."

"Yeah, it has Jeff.." Liu said.

It became awkward and BEN grabbed (y/n)'s hand and started to walk her out. Once they reached the door, (Y/n) hold one of her sides and fell to the ground.

"(Y/n)?" I said.

I ran up to her and looked at her as she pain showed on her face and looked at her side. I touched her side and she winced and moved my hand.

"D-Don't.." she whispered.

"What's wrong?" I said.

"My....side.." she said.

"Let me see." I said.

She slowly lifted her shirt up a little and saw the open wound last time she was here but it was black like it wasn't healed. I looked at BEN and Liu and they were looking back.

"She's injured.." I sighed.

"What to we do?" BEN said.

I shrugged and looked back at (Y/n).

"Maybe you could carry her and we could find someone to help her injury?" Liu said.

I looked at him and thought for a moment and nodded. I picked her up slowly and started walking out of the room, with (y/n) in my arms and BEN and Liu behind.

Your P.O.V

You were picked up and were Jeff's arms and the pain on your side was killing ou. You looked at your side and it bleeding and was black. You tried to touch it but you moved your hand quickly and groaned in pain.

"Don't touch it (y/n).." Jeff said.

"Couldn't say that earlier?" you said.

He chuckled and hid your face in his chest until you lifted your head up when you heard running coming towards you. Jeff noticed and looked at you.

"What's wrong (y/n)?" he said.

"Someone's coming.." you said.

"Who's coming?" BEN said.

"Someone but...there coming this way.." you said.

You heard the footsteps coming closer and looked somewhere to hide and pointed at the curtains.

"Hide over there.." you said.

Jeff, BEN, and Liu nodded and you and Jeff hid behind the curtains while BEN and Liu hid behind some barrels. You waited until the footsteps stopped in front of you. You heard more footsteps and peep out and it was a group of guards and Zalgo.

"She nowhere to found, Sir Zalgo.." one guard said.

"How? She couldn't go far unless....the ugly smile boy came to get her.." Zalgo said.

"Ugly? I'll show you ugly." Jeff whispered before you covered his mouth.

"Shhhh....stay quiet until they leave." you whispered.

He looked at you and you looked back until the guards and Zalgo left. You stick your head out of curtains and saw the coast was clear.

"Alright, there're gone.." you whispered.

"Why are you still whispering?" Jeff said.

"Cause I can and I want to.." you said.

"Really? That is just stu-"

"Could we talk about this later?!" you yelled before Jeff covered your mouth with his hand.

"Shhhhh.." he said.

You slapped his hand away and crossed your arms.

"Don't shushed me.." you said.

"Well sweetheart, I just did.." he said, grinning.

"Whatever, just...put me down." you said.

"You sure?" he said with a hint a worried.

You nodded and he put you down. You started to walked but stumbled a bit and Jeff grabbed you.

"I-I got this.." you said.

"Nope, I'm carrying you.." he said.

"I got this!" you said.

But it was too late, he was carrying you...again. You looked at him and pouted and he looked back and chuckled. You looked away and called for Liu and BEN, who were laughing. You looked at them with confusion.

"What's so funny?" you said.

"You and Jeff arguing.." BEN said, tying to control his laugh.

You looked back at Jeff and he gave BEN a death glare. You winced and hold your side with both you r hands when Jeff looked back you.

"(Y/n), what's wrong?" Jeff said.

"My side is killing me.." you said and buried your face in his chest, trying to wait for the pain wash away. You looked at your side and lifted your shirt up a little and saw that the wound was bleeding.

Jeff's P.O.V

She hid her face in my chest and I started to blush a little and looked at BEN and Liu and they snickered until they started to blush when they saw (y/n) lifting her shirt up and her injury was getting worse by the minute. She pulled her shirt back down and looked at all of us and gave us a confusing look.

"What? What are you guys looking at and why are two blushing?" she said.

We all shook our head and her wound was showing blood soaking her shirt. I walked off with her and looked for Jack  to see if he has any bandages to cover her wound. BEN and Liu followed behind and we found Jack fast when he came in front of us.

"Hey guys! I see you found (y/n) and who's that?" Jack said while pointing at Liu.

"My brother.." I said.

"R-Really?" he said.

I nodded "Yup and what about the guards?"

He smiled. "All taken care of and I wouldn't want to check the room they were all in."

"I don't want to even know.." BEN said.

"Either way, do have any bandages?" I said.

He nodded and he took out bandages out of his pocket and gave it to me. I grabbed it and looked for a room to put (y/n) in. I finally found one and put (y/n) in there and put on bed slowly. I lifted her shirt a little and started to bandage her wound. She winced every time I touched her or I tighten the bandages. I finished bandaging her wounds and stepped away from her. She got up and got up but stumbled a little until she handle it herself. I walked up her and looked at her side and blood was still soaking her side and she covered her wound with her hands.

"Stop looking.." she said.

I nodded. "Let's go.."

"Yeah, I don't think so.." a voice said.

(Y/n) and I looked at the doorway and saw Zalgo and guards behind with Liu, Jack, and BEN tackled down by some guards.

"Fuck..." I said.

.............to be continued..............

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:iconpeek-a-bo09112000:
PeEk-A-bo09112000 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2015  New member
THIS IS WHY PEWDS DOSENT TRUST YOU BARRELS!!!!!
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:iconmaskylover9900:
maskylover9900 Featured By Owner Jul 23, 2014
FUCK YOU ZALGO AND THOSE BARRELS!!!!
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:iconfangirlhetalia:
FANGIRLHetalia Featured By Owner May 22, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
NO!!!! BARRELS!!!! YOU DON'T TOUCH BARRELS!!!!
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:iconchinxino:
Chinxino Featured By Owner Apr 22, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
BARRELZ, YOU TOLD ZALGO ABOUT US DIDNT YOU!!!! I KNEW YOU COULDNT BE TRUSTED, YOU CAN NEVER BE TRUSTED YOU MUTHER-....
*goes on and on about barrelz*
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Marshyfan123 Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2014
More you have to write more
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:iconlilianboy:
lilianboy Featured By Owner Apr 8, 2014  Student Artist
fuck you barrels!
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SympathyfortheDevil9 Featured By Owner Apr 1, 2014  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
BARREL!
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:iconcreepypasta2002:
Creepypasta2002 Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Well fuck!
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Budderisveryspecial Featured By Owner May 10, 2014
You can say that again slenderman. Also WHERE SCREWED!
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FluffyShadowPaw Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Sir. I hate your face. Its ugly! Jeff has a beautiful face unlike you!
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:iconblue730:
blue730 Featured By Owner Mar 3, 2014
GOD ZALGO GET A LIFE AND JUST LEAVE ME ALONE!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! :giantfrown: :giantfrown: :giantfrown: :giantfrown: :angry: :angry: :angry: :angry: :reallymad: :reallymad: :reallymad: :reallymad: 
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swreld-star Featured By Owner Jan 27, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
WHAT THE FUCK ZALGO YOU BITCH FUCK FUCK FUUUUUUUCKKKK -has a mini rage in coner- SHIT FUCK WELLL SHIT
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shadowluker Featured By Owner Dec 29, 2013  Student Artist
Is Chapter 36 out? If so plz give me the link T^T
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DistortedMelody Featured By Owner Jan 13, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
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kalkeeli Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013
I dont think its done yet, sorry it stinks ikkkkk
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:iconshadowluker:
shadowluker Featured By Owner Dec 28, 2013  Student Artist
I can't find Chapter 36 T^T
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:iconluckywebs13:
luckywebs13 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Pt 36 plzzzzzzzz
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:iconkalkeeli:
kalkeeli Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013
have they even written it yet?

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:iconkalkeeli:
kalkeeli Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013
if so I cant find it XXD
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:iconluckywebs13:
luckywebs13 Featured By Owner Dec 23, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
I don't know sadly v.v
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:iconkalkeeli:
kalkeeli Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2013
its okay XD

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:iconluckywebs13:
luckywebs13 Featured By Owner Dec 25, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Cx
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:iconhannah0628:
Hannah0628 Featured By Owner Dec 16, 2013  Hobbyist
Cant find the beginning... Plez send a link... Plez!beg 
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luckywebs13 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
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:iconhannah0628:
Hannah0628 Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2013  Hobbyist
Thank you so much!
:excited: 
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:iconluckywebs13:
luckywebs13 Featured By Owner Dec 20, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Its the beginning ^^
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:iconzombielover43:
Zombielover43 Featured By Owner Dec 14, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
ahhh can't wait for more!!!!!!!!! :DDD i love it <3
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mewkitti Featured By Owner Dec 13, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
can't find part 36 D: 
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:iconkaty221:
katy221 Featured By Owner Dec 9, 2013  Student General Artist
ExSuCe Me DaLiNg BuT wHeRe Is 36 ?
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:iconindigogrub:
Indigogrub Featured By Owner Dec 6, 2013
Please make more why you gata end it in cliff hanger u so cruel and btw why cant i find these storys on your page?
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:iconchipmonk1999:
chipmonk1999 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013
Man i couldn't stop reading! Love it but will you make more! please! :hug:
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:iconkillanichairmode228:
KillaniChairmode228 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
CONTINUEE~!!! QWQ
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:iconkillanichairmode228:
KillaniChairmode228 Featured By Owner Dec 5, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MORE MOER MORE MORE MORE MORE MREMREORMOERMEORMEORMEORMEORMEORMEORM!!!!! :iconjeffthekillerplz:
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jazzmynethekiller Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2013
Moar!!!!!!!
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SofieKlausmark Featured By Owner Nov 25, 2013  Hobbyist Traditional Artist
Please more!!!
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:iconyuki1112:
yuki1112 Featured By Owner Nov 21, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Awwwwwww moooorrrrrrrre!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:iconnnava4:
nnava4 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2013
F****** awesome!!!!
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SonPanssj4 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2013  Hobbyist Artist

Jeff: Ugly? I'll show you Ugly!

 

That part cracked me up! XD

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Riko-Naitou Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Amazing as always~! Oh btw, thuis is the 2nd time I have seen this story on the journal Portal of deviantart~!
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manicgirl155 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
MOAR! :iconmoarplz:

DIS IS AMAZING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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:iconconnie123456:
CONNIE123456 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2013
LOL jeff and the other guyz are perverts
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:iconrandomjellybean:
RandomJellyBean Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2013  Hobbyist Artist
Shake Sparta 
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:iconaoiaki12:
aoiaki12 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2013  Student General Artist
So what's with Liu? And doe anyone want cheesecake?
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:iconanimegeek220:
animegeek220 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2013
NOOOOOOO!! WHY DID YOU ALWAYS LEAVE IT CLIFF HANGER!!!!!!
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spadegrrl Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2013
NO! A cliffhanger! :icontableflipplz:
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CuriousCat-13 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Dammit cliff hangers!!!! Anyways, great job on the chapter and see you in the next one. :3
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chiix04 Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2013
Continue please? :iconretardiloveitplz::icontearyguyplz:
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PaperKoalas Featured By Owner Nov 18, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Emegard continueee!!!
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