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Jeff The Killer: Sweet dreams are made of screams by Anyerina

****Three years later****


Jeff's P.O.V

Its been three years without (y/n) and I'm starting to wonder if she remembers me. I stay in my room most of the time and with everyone here trying to cheer me up isn't making me fell better but worse. Every time I try to go visit her, either Jane snitches on me or Slendy follows me and stops me. I stayed in my room for the rest of the day until BEN and Jack came into my room.

"Jeffy!" BEN said.

"Leave me alone." I said.

"Come on man, don't be a such a downer! Let's go!" Jack said.

"Go where?" I asked.

"We are going to do mission impossible." BEN smirked.

"We going to kill Jane and say it was on 'accident'?" I asked.

They both shook their heads and gets a giant grin on their face.

"We are going on a field trip!" they both screamed at the same time.

"Where are we going?" I asked, all suspicious

"Doesn't matter! Let's go!" BEN said.

I shrugged and got off bed and followed them. We walked for hours and my feet were tired as ever. We finally stopped and I looked around to see where we are at but all I see are rows of houses.

"Where the hell are we?!" I said.

"It's a surprise!" Jack said.

I sighed and followed them until we reached a house that had a white Hummer, black Mustang, red Camaro, and a silver motorcycle outside. We picked the lock of the front door and entered the house. It looked normal with a flat screen TV, leather couches, and other things. We walked up the stairs and stopped in front of a door. They looked at me as if I knew what's going on.

"Well.... are you going to open it or not?" I asked.

They snickered and I shook my head and opened the door.

"Look guys, I don't....know.....why.......you...........brought.........me............me here." my voice trailed off as I saw someone sleeping on the bed, (y/n)

I looked back at them and they screamed surprise but then (y/n) woke up.

 

Your P.O.V

You woke up from somebody screaming 'surprise' and your vision was still blurry but you saw someone in front of you. Your vision cleared up and you were shocked on who you saw, Jeff.

"J-Jeff?" you said.

"(Y/n).." Jeff said.

You smiled and ran up to him and hugged him. He hugged back and kissed the top of your head.

"(Y/n) I missed you." he said.

"I missed you too." you said.

"We will give you some alone time while me and Jack go on a killing spree." BEN said.

They left and you were left with Jeff, alone.

"So.....(y/n)... how is it here?" Jeff said.

"It's alright but at least I don't get to see Jane anymore." you said.

"(Y/n)... I want to asked you something." he said.

"Sure, what?" you said.

He sighed "Did you forget about me?"

You looked at him

"I don't think I would forget someone who has a giant smile like yours." you said.

"So.... a no?" he said.

You shook your head, sat on your bed and started to draw in your sketchbook. Then Jeff sat next to you and watched you draw a weird sign.

"What is that?" he asked.

You looked at him and shrugged.

"I don't know. I saw this in my dream and I started to draw this when i woke up but, I don't know what it means." you said.

Jeff looked at it one more time and grabbed your hand.

"Where are we going?" you said.

He put you over his back.

 "To the manor. I think Slendy might tell us what this means." he said.

"But....But what about my uncle?" you said.

"We'll just know what this means and maybe I'll bring you back." he said smirking.

...........................to be continued....................

 

All chapters: fav.me/d7b9qdf
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:icongermany6669:
germany6669 Featured By Owner Jun 6, 2014  Hobbyist Writer
maybe i'll bring you back. XD
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xXThe-Story-TellerXx Featured By Owner Apr 30, 2014  Student Artist
o-o   "I don't think I would forget someone who has a giant smile like yours." you said."   <--LOL
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ammiexlevi Featured By Owner Mar 29, 2014  Student Digital Artist
: DD jeffy dont kill mah uncle k im goin to kill him i told u o kill jane ok ^///^
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FluffyShadowPaw Featured By Owner Mar 21, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
YUS wait Jeff I was gonna kill my uncle tomorrow!
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:iconfrog6:
frog6 Featured By Owner Mar 18, 2014  Student Artist
"Maybe" he says. 
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see3748 Featured By Owner Mar 5, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
I have a feeling I drew zalgy's symbol
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blue730 Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014

"We going to kill Jane say it was an 'accident'?"

LOL! BEST LINE EVER!! XD

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jessicacookie2 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2014  Hobbyist
yeah great idea Jane gets in the way anywayLlama-Emoji-12 (Left and Right) [V1] Llama-Emoji-12 (Left and Right) [V1] 
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:iconblue730:
blue730 Featured By Owner Jun 3, 2014
True!
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:iconlaughing-jack-lover:
Laughing-Jack-Lover Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014
XD ikr!?
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:iconblue730:
blue730 Featured By Owner Mar 12, 2014
XD
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:icontizzy101:
Tizzy101 Featured By Owner Feb 28, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
WTF?! WHEN DO I! GET TO KILL SOMEONE?!
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:iconnoom191:
Noom191 Featured By Owner Feb 24, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
MAYBE?!?!?! He is gonna kidnap me and keep me in some random basement in an abandoned town and chain me up so he can do stuff to me isn't he?
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Laughing-Jack-Lover Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014
o.O
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:icongab226789:
gab226789 Featured By Owner Jan 21, 2014  Student Writer
yup just a maybe don't get your hopes up though XD
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Ryah17rose Featured By Owner Dec 30, 2013  Hobbyist Filmographer
Lol yeah MAYBE you'll bring meh back! XD 😝
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jazzmynethekiller Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2013
Yay my feels are restored
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ghostgirl132 Featured By Owner Nov 24, 2013
jeff:so were gonna kill jane and say it was an accident! lol happy? not? 
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jazzmynethekiller Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2013
I would be all for it. The bitch deserves it.
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:iconblushingemo:
blushingemo Featured By Owner Dec 27, 2013
The bitch deserves it
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:iconblue730:
blue730 Featured By Owner Mar 11, 2014
Yeah she does!The Seriously Evil Laugh 
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:iconblushingemo:
blushingemo Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014
No kidding
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:iconwinterarcher:
winterarcher Featured By Owner Feb 27, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
The Seriously Evil Laugh yup
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:iconblushingemo:
blushingemo Featured By Owner Mar 1, 2014
She very well deserves it
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:iconwinterarcher:
winterarcher Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
Totally.
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:iconblushingemo:
blushingemo Featured By Owner Mar 14, 2014
Naw dip
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:iconastonishingdream:
astonishingDream Featured By Owner Mar 7, 2014  Hobbyist Artist
Totes magoats
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:iconwinterarcher:
winterarcher Featured By Owner Mar 9, 2014  Hobbyist Digital Artist
AUGH!! NO!!! NOT TOTES MAGOATS!! JNHGYTSFTYDOKcfmjhrduvhbfIOSJCHUYIDSE8A9IWOUFVUGBRYXDIUJ!! Spaz attack Spaz attack Spaz attack 
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Liisi55 Featured By Owner Nov 8, 2013
YAY!! BACK TOGETHER :3
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KillerBoosBoodLust Featured By Owner Oct 16, 2013  Hobbyist Interface Designer
Love it !!!!!!!
You're awesome !
<3
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:iconlytrigian:
Lytrigian Featured By Owner Oct 9, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
Reported. And I'm going to keep reporting these until you stop categorizing them in such a way that they appear in the Journal Portal footer. The correct category is likely Fan Art/Fanfiction/Horror.
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:iconwolfofthenightmares2:
wolfofthenightmares2 Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013  Student Digital Artist
what?O_o ur sentences make no sense person.......
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:iconlytrigian:
Lytrigian Featured By Owner Oct 10, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
This is not a lit feature journal. It's fanfic, and should be categorized that way.
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:iconwolfofthenightmares2:
wolfofthenightmares2 Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2013  Student Digital Artist
ur the only person reading this fic that really gives a flying fuck,save your self from getting cyber bullied by me or some crazed fangirl,because,NO ONE gives two or three shits about what category it's in!o_e :iconpissedoffplz: 
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:iconjazzmynethekiller:
jazzmynethekiller Featured By Owner Dec 1, 2013
Preach!
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:iconwolfofthenightmares2:
wolfofthenightmares2 Featured By Owner Feb 23, 2014  Student Digital Artist
I Shall!^o^
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:iconthe-nerd-patrol:
the-nerd-patrol Featured By Owner Nov 19, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Bro
bro
bro
sorry if that bothers you i call everyone bro v.v

Lytrigian is making a legitimate complaint. Putting things in the wrong category isn't exactly the smartest thing to do and making this fanfic in a journal of all things rather than an actual literature post so it can be correctly categorized is a bit... odd, in my opinion ._.'
and it does seem like a way to get views-- thats kind of working considering i found this story because of the journal portal o_e...

And just because you disagree with what someone is saying or doing (because to be honest i'm not fully agreeing with his/her decision to report the author for this unless Lytrigian already tried discussing this with hoodiegirl924 and she didn't listen because in that case its kind of justified) doesn't mean you should threaten to cyber-bully them. Cyber-bullying is a serious issue and you shouldn't loosely threaten to do something as cruel as that simply because they told someone to correctly categorize a fanfiction. its really rude bro sorry again about the bro thing its a bad habit //sob
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wolfofthenightmares2 Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2013  Student Digital Artist
(is ok if u call me bro)i'm sorry but Not to burst ur bubble but there are alot of fangirls and readers reading this fic,you don't see them reporting the story,I can't report a xreader especially if it's this kind,i'm a guard wolf,is my job to protect the fics!!>:U I don't liek it when ppl go reporting good storys(especially good ones)JUST BECAUSE THERE NOT CATEGORIZED CORRECTLY.>:U srry person
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the-nerd-patrol Featured By Owner Nov 20, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
(okay just making sureee) 
i agree that it shouldn't be reported because thats sort of overreacting, yet the author pointed in a comment on the next chapter that there was an issue that made her unable to make this a lit. text, and she was given the solution by multiple people but still didn't change ittttt
which makes very little sense to me since making it a literature thingy instead of a journal would make her able to categorize it and tag it correctly so she could get more views and stuff so that would be benefitting her
plus it might actually bother people in the journal portal looking for literature features because this isn't a literature feature but it's categorized as thattt 
im sorry i'll go away now
 
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Lytrigian Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
I do, when it pollutes every page I visit by showing up in the Journal Portal footer. Even if this were any good, it's a cheap ploy to get views.
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wolfofthenightmares2 Featured By Owner Oct 15, 2013  Student Digital Artist
then go read something else,that's in the right category,instead of getting chewed out by the guard dog of CP fan-fics(me)if you don't like something about it,then GTFO,even if it's the category.this wolf don't like dealing with people like you,so fuzz off!
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callamoon14 Featured By Owner Nov 4, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Your not the only wolf here... *growls*
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:iconwolfofthenightmares2:
wolfofthenightmares2 Featured By Owner Nov 5, 2013  Student Digital Artist
I know,but i'm not just a wolf,i'm a Nightmare Wolf and i was just cussin' this dude out for reporting this fan-fic,^^ he didn't reply ha ha
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x-ruika-san-x Featured By Owner Oct 8, 2013  Student Digital Artist
Haha I think he will not let her start off again x) 
[ Sorry for my English TT-TT ]
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NightFuryDragon28 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
Back together YAY! Good job in writing. Can't wait for the next part.
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hoodiegirl924 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013  Student Artist
thanks :iconsmilesplz:
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NizzyThaAllStar Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013  Hobbyist Writer
YAY BACK TOGETHER AGAIN :D !
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Elvira-Slender Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013  Hobbyist Digital Artist
YAY!! BACK TOGETHER :3
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Desy017 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013  Hobbyist General Artist
part 13!! part 13!!part 13!!part 13!!part 13!!part 13!!part 13!!part 13!! XD
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aoiaki12 Featured By Owner Oct 7, 2013  Student General Artist
3 hours ago...and still screaming that!
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