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You turned off your alarm and got up to see what was today, Friday. You looked at the time and  it was 6 A.M. in the morning and you had about 2 hours before school started. You went straight to the restroom to take a shower and other morning routines before you went back to your room to change into a (f/c) shirt, black jeans, (f/c) converse, and your (f/c) headphones. You finished changing and looked at the time and it 6:45 A.M. so you went downstairs to eat breakfast. You ate cereal and once you finished eating, you went straight back up to your room. You grabbed your brush and brushed your hair before you straighten your hair. After that, you grabbed your binder, backpack and your phone and looked at the time, it was 7:15 A.M. and you decided to walk to school right now.

You left your house and started walking down the street until a boy yelled your name behind you. "(Y/n)! Wait up!"

You looked behind you and saw Brandon Dillard, the kid you babysit down the street. Brandon is a 10-year-old boy who was a little troublemaker and loves to spend his time on the internet. You stopped where you were for 10 seconds until Brandon reached you and started walking next to you.

"What do you want Brandon?" you said.

"Guess what I found out?" he said.

You shrugged. " I give up, what is it?"

"Well, the police found this guy who was known as the Mexican Wolf Man and his name was Orlando and he had hair all over his face." he said.

"Wow, you know so much about him." you said.

"Yeah, but have you heard of Eyeless Jack?" he said.

You nodded. "Yup, they talk about him everyday at school."

 "Well, did you know that he eats organs and has no eyes?" he said.

You sighed. "No, I did not know he ate organs and yes, I know he has no eyes because that's why they call him Eyeless Jack."

You walked past the house of murders because years ago, a boy killed his family while they were sleeping. The house looked new but everyone around the neighborhood was scared to go inside there. You took out a piece of paper inside your binder and placed your backpack on the floor.

"What are you doing?" Brandon said.

"Putting this paper in the house." you said.

"You can't go in there!" he yelled.

"Why not?" you said.

"Jeff the Killer lives there and he's going to kill you." he said.

You ignored him and walked up to the front porch. You slid the paper under the front door and walked back to grab your backpack. You looked at Brandon and he was shocked.

"What? It was just a paper that has a picture of the house with someone looking out the window.." you said.

"Who?" he said.

"Some guy wearing a blue mask." you said.

Brandon gasped. "You saw Eyeless Jack?!"

You shrugged "I don't know who it was but all I saw was a blue mask."

"If you survive the weekend, I'll be impressed if he didn't kill or eat you." he said.

You ignored him and started walking to school. "Go to school Brandon."

Eyeless Jack's P.O.V

I was walking inside Jeff's old house so I could grab something that he needed the most in there, his knives. I grabbed all his knives and started walking to the front door until I heard footsteps coming towards the front door. I put my ear on the door to hear what's happening. All I heard were footsteps coming towards the door until they stopped. Then, a piece of paper was slid under the door and I grabbed it. I opened it and saw it was Jeff's house but it showed in one of the windows, I was looking out. I crumbled the paper and threw it behind me before I put my ear back on the door.

"What? It was just a paper that has a picture of the house with someone looking out the window.." a female said.

"Who?" a little boy said.

"I don't know who it was but all I saw was a blue mask." the female said.

'Dammit! That girl out there saw me! And now, I know who's organs I'm eating tonight.' I thought.

"If you survive the weekend, I'll be impressed if he didn't kill or eat you." the boy said.

Then, footsteps walking away and more footsteps followed. But, I wondered who were the boy and female was.

"Go to school Brandon." the female yelled.

"Well, I know the boy's name is Brandon and my dessert tonight, young organs. But, who was the girl?" I said to myself.

I opened the door to see if the coast was clear until I started walking to the woods. I kept Jeff's knives in my pockets and since I was dazing off into my mind, I didn't know who bumped into. I stumbled back a little and saw who I bumped into. It was girl around my age and let me just say that she looked like an angel. I didn't say anything to her but just looked at her beauty.

"Sorry....I guess you didn't see me but its alright." the girl said.

'She sounded familiar.' I thought.

She looked at me in confusion. "Can you hear me?"

I nodded and that's when I found out who she was, it was the girl who must have slid the paper under Jeff's door.

"Well, I guess I should leave if I don't want a detention from school so, bye." she said and walked off.

I stood there for a minute until I came back to reality. I looked around me and ran into the woods to meet up with BEN and Jeff. When I was walking in the woods, I kept thinking about that girl until I shook my head.

"No Jack, killers can't love unless they love their victim's blood." I said to myself.

'Or can they?' I thought. be continued...........

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Aestas-Hiems Featured By Owner Jun 17, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Jeff be like: "Go to sleep!"
I be like: "Go to school!"
Pikachu-Jenna Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2014
xD This has been Words Of Wisdom with Aestas-Hiems.
bloodmoonFANGZ13 Featured By Owner Apr 11, 2014
oh my gosh ej stop thinking about eating for a dang seconde
Ask-MistyJay Featured By Owner Feb 10, 2014  Student Artist
AWESOME.. wait how did i not find anything weird about EJ... like... he has a mask and NO EYES?! XD
voodoodoll8 Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2014
Creepypasta's can disguise them-selfs to look like normal people
Tatumsowninsaneworld Featured By Owner Mar 2, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Did you watch The Seer??? oWo
HIKARUANDKAORUSSIS Featured By Owner Apr 14, 2014
I liked the seer!! I was kinda sad when they changed JFK 's voice though
Tatumsowninsaneworld Featured By Owner Apr 26, 2014  Hobbyist General Artist
Yeah me too... have you seen the bloopers part two???
voodoodoll8 Featured By Owner Mar 4, 2014
Maybe ^_^ and some other stories
Ask-MistyJay Featured By Owner Feb 11, 2014  Student Artist
Ooooh yeaaaaaah...
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